Alameins+writing

TAlamein MATARIKI What is Matariki? Matariki is the clustering of the 7 ancestors and is a time for Maori New years ,also new beggining When does Matariki occur? Matariki rises at the end of start June right through until one moon is finished and a new one begins there are 8 different types of star phases What are the themes of Matariki? We do Matariki because its a start for fishing, planting and is the end of harvesting.During Matariki you will have celebrations with festivals,food and music.

Te wiki o te reo Maori is about a week of Moari language and is about manaakitanga; caring, usually during Maori language week people would be celebrating with customs and celebrations.

__M Y GOALS __ __WRITING __

My goal is to use dialogue when I'm writing a narrative piece of writing or whenever dialogue is required. I want to achieve this goal because in my asttle writing test I did not include any dialogue. I'm going to achieve this goal by making sure there are some people talking.

 My second goal is to make sure my paragraphs are set out properly. I want to achieve this goal because when I set out my paragraphs they were in the wrong places and they never made sense. I'm going to achieve this goal just by making sure i do paragraphs from now on.

My third goal is to make sure the audience gets more information and make my stories more exciting. I want to achieve this goal because my story was boring and didn't give enough information. I'm going to achieve this goal by making my work exciting and interesting to read.

My last goal is to give a resolution. I want to achieve this goal because i never did a resolution. <span style="color: #620ce9; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">I'm going to achieve this goal by giving resolutions next time.

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">All of these goals are important to me because if i do achieve these goals there going to help me do an excellent piece of writing so thats <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">i want to achieve all these goals.

<span style="color: #f34f4f; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 250%;">**__//reflection//__** //1)// <span style="color: #f34f4f; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 250%;"> M // y first goal was to use dialogue But I don't think I have achieved this goal as it shows on my narrative next term that is going to be one of my goals i'm still going to concentrate on. //

<span style="color: #ef4d4d; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 250%;">2) M // y second goal was to make sure I use paragraphs in my stories I think I have completed but only a little bit so its still a goal to concentrate on. // <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">3) //My third goal was to make sure the audience gets more excited; I think I have acjieved this goal completely and is one of the goals I have achieved so I don't need to cancentrate on it anymore.//

= //4) My last goal was to give a resolution in my narrative I think I have achieved and this goaL no need to be concentrated on.// = = = = //MY 3 TERM GOALS// = =<span style="color: #e53e3e; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 33px; line-height: 48px;">My goal is to proofread my work ever time i finish it.I want to achieve this goal because usually I never proofread and my writing doesn't make any sense.I'm going to achieve this goal by proofreading from now on. =

<span style="color: #e53e3e; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 33px; line-height: 48px;">My new goal is to practise my geometry.I want to achieve this goal because I'm not good in geometry and i want to learn more.I'm going to achieve this goal by listening in our maths session.

<span style="color: #e53e3e; font-family: Impact,Charcoal,sans-serif; font-size: 33px; line-height: 48px;">My reading goal is to practise my fluency.I want to achieve this goal because i want to read more fluent than I am.I'm going to achieve this goal by practising my reading in S.S.R.

<span style="background-color: #2da4e6; color: #fae53d; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace; font-size: 300%; text-align: center;">Treaty of Waitanginotes~//William hobson what the person that made the treaty of Waitangi.////~The traety of Waitangi was signed by 540 rangitira (chiefs).////~Approximately 125,000 Maoris lived in New zealand in 1830 and only 2000 british settlers.////~More people singed the English version of the Treaty of Waitangi because they couldn't understand the maori version.////~James busby was the architech of the declaration of independance.//

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My Reflection My writing goal was to proofread my work every time i finish my work like reading,writing and my maths.I reckon i did achieve this goal.Although i achieved this goal I need to proofread a bit more so i can make my writing better.I want to achieve this goal so my writing can be exciting and good to hear.

My reading goal was to practise my fluency.I reckon I did not achieve this goal and I should still work towards this goal. I'm going to achieve this goal in S.S.R ,or when I'm at home.I need to practise this goal so when i have to read to someone I'll make sense.

My math goal was to practise my geometry for our test.I reckon I did achieve this goal but now I want to now practise my measurement because that's what we are focusing on this year.I want to achieve this goal so i can understand my maths that I am given.